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       memories of Happy days,
                        Of dreams dreamed loud
             and the Music of a spinning record.
                   of hAnds held tight
           and vows Gone unspoken.
 memories of a timE long lost.
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A short poem written as part of a writing workshop. I don't think poetry is really my thing...

Tell me whatchia think below please :D

...also, getting the letters to line up was really weird... depending on how big the screen you are using is, it may not quite look right. The capital letters in each line are supposed to line up to spell homage!
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:icongaarajinchuuriki:
I like it a lot. Your poetry is really good!
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~McKinleyWiens Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very kindly :) I used to kinda dislike poetry, but it is growing on me fast!
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:iconfirelightprincess:
This is so moving!
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~McKinleyWiens Jan 29, 2013  Student Writer
Thank ya kindly. Has a whole new meaning now.
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:iconfirelightprincess:
No kidding.
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~candyzombielord Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
sound sad. it's just a sad poem. but its good.
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~MidnightMadness11 Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
What are you paying homage to?
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~McKinleyWiens Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
Nothing specifically, I just like the word, than worked in random sentences :P
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~MidnightMadness11 Jan 22, 2013  Student Writer
tsk tsk
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~WildDragonFlying Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really cool, and really good! Guess they're teaching you something useful at university after all! :p
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